Author’s Note: We were provided with a free copy of this novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.
Plot & Storyline Quality (2.5 points)
Colleen Coble brings a dramatic suspense plot to life in this new title. Where Shadows Meet has a mostly engaging plot-line with a well-done plot twist for the conclusion. The struggle of suspense plots is always crafting a believable villain. Coble does an admirable job here by concealing the villain’s identity until nearly the last moment. However, the biggest fault I found with the villain was that while they had reason to be the way that they were, the explanation behind their twisted actions was revealed in an information dump at the end, rather than developing gradually throughout the tale. However, the biggest strength here was most definitely the plot and storyline quality. This is what saved the book from being below average. Hannah Schwartz is your average young Amish woman. She is engaged to an kind young man whose lack of wow factor is remedied by his standing in the community. And anyway, the bishop approves of the match, and what he says is law. Her family loves her, she has good friends…and yet, Hannah envies the ways of the English (average Americans). When her parents are brutally killed by a serial murderer who is known by their infamous red symbol, Hannah flees everything she knows and runs away to marry her secret lover, an enigma named Reece. However, the English life holds nothing but sorrow for Hannah, for the kind and supportive man she married transforms quickly into a controlling madman who hates children and won’t even consider the idea of parenthood. Hannah’s eventual pregnancy sends Reece over the edge, and he pushes her down the stairs in an effort to rid himself of the child within her. Hannah survives the fall and Reece tells her their unborn child has died. Hannah runs again, this time to a new life as an author and quilt-maker. Five years pass, and she finally begins to believe in her freedom…then comes the dreaded phone call. Reece knows where she is and how to contact her. Will she ever escape his grasp and learn the identity of her parent’s killer? Will she receive the child her heart longs for? To answer these questions, read the book!;)
Coble is obviously a talented writer whose specialty is suspense, however, I felt like she was holding back in this plot-line. There are so many books by wannabe famous authors in the suspense genre that Coble must rise above with superior skill. Some may feel my rating harsh, but I simply believe that Coble can give her audience more. Yet, I will say that this book has the potential to revolutionize the Amish theme in Christian film. Therefore, I would like to see it brought to life on the big screen by someone wishing to breathe fresh air into the Amish genre.
Character Development (1.5 points)
It is my opinion that the character development in this novel has room for improvement. Hannah is mostly well-developed, and Reece is not entirely a straw-man abusive husband character, however, it is hard to get to know these characters when the book is written in third person. First person is the way to go in virtually every genre, and this would have improved the novel dramatically. By telling the story in first-person, it would have transformed into a character-driven plot. The readers would have been able to relate to and root for Hannah, and likewise hate and abhor the villain(s). Lastly, the secondary characters are believable, but still, they could have been better. Thus, I think that this is the main area in which Coble could improve.
Creativity & Originality (.5 point)
Finally, I am giving Coble a half point for originality because she did something with the Amish theme that no one has done before. Instead of idolizing their way of living, she pointed out both it’s strengths and weaknesses and used it as the focal point of a suspense plot. This is commendable in many ways, but mostly because the Amish fiction corner is overcrowded and musty with too many similar plot-lines. It is for this reason that Coble has the potential to go far; she clearly has the ability to take an overused plot theme and turn it into something original. Therefore, I recommend this book as a worthwhile read and think that it could go far on the big screen. On the whole, good job Mrs. Coble, we are excited to see what you create next!
Wish List Rating: 5 out of 10 points