Yours Truly, Thomas by Rachel Fordham (BTSNBM)

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Author’s Note: We were provided with a free copy of this novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.

Plot & Storyline Quality (1.5 points)

Fordham’s latest novel, the second installment in the Azure Springs series, is a bit of letdown after her promising start. Penny has just suffered the death of her beloved father, and as a result, has become the household breadwinner for herself and her mother. The death of her father means that she and her mother have not had the funds to enjoy the high society life they were used to, and her mother has been depressed about this ever since. Her grief over her late husband causes her to treat Penny harshly and without consideration. This has left Penny feeling hurt and somewhat confused as to what the future holds. On the bright side, she enjoys most things about being a clerk in the dead letter office, however, she doesn’t enjoy throwing letters away. One day she stumbles upon passionate letters from a man named Thomas to a woman named Clara. After learning more about him through his writing, she decides to ensure that his letters reach Clara as soon as possible. Thomas is a broken individual with a colorful past who ends up in Azure Springs by chance. When Penny runs into Thomas on her search for Clara, she conceals her real reason for traveling and pretends to be an author. As time goes on, the two get to know each other better, and Thomas falls in love with Penny. On the whole, the storyline is pretty basic and predictable. It was a nice touch to use someone’s journey to Christ as the basis for a storyline, but the whole story seems a bit too good to be true. Additionally, the overused falling-in-love-right-after-breaking-up (or while still in a relationship) plot device is unrealistic and gives hurting people false hope. It is not healthy to seek fulfillment in relationships with people. What the world needs is fiction that points people to God’s healing power. Healing is not found in the arms of a man or woman, but in the arms of Jesus. Therefore, what Fordham is missing is depth and a balanced writing worldview – more reality, less fantasy. For these reasons, Fordham earns a below average score in this section.

Character Development (2 points)

Fordham’s character development is the strongest point of the novel and saves it from complete mediocrity. Penny is a good protagonist and the best character because other’s actions and decisions affect her own, and she changes in response to her good and bad life experiences. Additionally, the flashbacks to her childhood are a nice touch. It would have been nice to see these as a continual, rather than sporadic feature. Thomas is a character with a lot of potential who feels unfinished. Much like Penny, it would be very helpful to have flashbacks of his past life throughout the novel, for this would give him depth and believability. In comparison, the worst minor characters are Penny’s mother and her boss. Both of these characters seem unpleasant without basis and drag down the overall plot quality. In contrast, Penny’s friend and co-worker Dinah is the best minor character because she is down-to-earth and realistic. Overall, these characters are a good try that need a little more work to be great. Likewise, since Fordham’s characters are better than her storyline, she earns an average score here.

Creativity & Originality (.5 point)

Finally, Fordham earns a half point in creativity for her use of flashbacks with the protagonist, and no points in originality for using the same plot structure as this novel’s predecessor. Additionally, this novel turns over a new leaf in the Box Office Wish List section. We will now be including books that should not be movies for the reasons listed in the corresponding reviews. These reviews will be indicated with the initials BTSNBM in parentheses by the book title. It is not our desire to hurt anyone’s feelings or be overly critical. However, the overcrowded world of fiction demands, unfortunately, some negative reviews. This being said, we here at BOR do not feel that Yours Truly, Thomas should be made into a film. The novel is reminiscent of the TV series Signed, Sealed, Delivered, which had potential, but mostly fell flat. Christian filmmakers should spend their time bringing books to the big screen that will change the world, not empower romantic fantasy.

Wish List Rating: 4 out of 10 points

The Hope of Azure Springs by Rachel Fordham

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Author’s Note: We were provided with an ARC of this novel in exchange for a fair and honest review.

Plot & Storyline Quality (2 points)

Rachel Fordham, a newcomer in the world of Christian fiction, has written and is soon to release her debut novel, The Hope of Azure Springs. Fordham’s writing style is strikingly similar to well-known authors like Janette Oke and Lori Wick. Hers is a poignant tale about two people facing similar life struggles who are drawn together by circumstances beyond their control. Em has been through a lot in her short life, yet she has persevered in spite of her circumstances. Despite the fact that she has just been shot during the robbery of her guardian’s house, Em’s one desire in life remains…to find her sister Lucy. Seven years ago the girls were separated during the unfair and questionable practices of the famed orphan trains, and Em feels guilty for failing to keep the promise she made her dying mother, to watch over Lucy. While recovering from her wounds at the home of a friendly local family, she begins to open up a bit and form relationships, which makes her fear failing again. Will she finally open up to someone about her past hurts and sorrows?  To answer this question, read the book!;) Fordham’s storyline is engaging, yet mostly predictable. I feel like she could have gone further with the mystery idea, for in the end it feels incomplete. Overall she needs to mature a bit as an author, but this is a great first effort!

Character Development (2 points)

Em and Caleb are realistic and relatable, but at times it feels as though one is reading their diary, not getting to know them as a person. First person was the name of the game here, not third; this would have greatly increased the reader’s ability to rejoice in the characters joys and sympathize with their sorrows. Em and Caleb have great backstories, but the tie-ins to their present condition could use a little work. Again, first person could have made this happen. Finally, it was observed by myself and other reviewers that Fordham narrowly missed creating a love triangle between Caleb, Eliza, and Em. Next time she should avoid it altogether. All in all, for never having written a book before, Fordham does an admirable job here.

Creativity & Originality (1 point)

Fordham earns a half point for creativity and a half point for originality in this section because she added an air of mystery and intrigue to the overcrowded romance genre. Furthermore, I feel that The Hope of Azure Springs could be a good Christian romantic suspense film. The screenwriter would need to bring the mystery theme to the forefront and downplay the romantic elements, but it can be done. Overall, this novel stands out from other books of it’s caliber and is a good first effort.

Wish List Rating: 5 out of 10 points